The author used no quotes from Danticat’s paper.
- Does your classmate use lead-ins well and appropriately integrate the quoted material into the paper? (The signal phrase/lead-in should smoothly move us into the quoted material or example and should be punctuated properly). A lead-in that is a complete sentence should be separated from the text by a colon, and a lead-in that is not a complete sentence should be separated from the text by a comma:
- For example:
- Neah said, “I had someone incompetent do it, and my tattoos don’t look like water bags, but two hot-air balloons” (Danticat 123).
OR:
- Neah spoke about her new tattoo: “I had someone incompetent do it, and my tattoos don’t look like water bags, but two hot-air balloons” (Danticat 123). The author did not use any Citations from Danticats book.
- Where could the lead-in be smoother? At the beginning of paragraph number two.
- How could the author more fully defend the thesis statement by the end of his/her paper?
- Offer suggestions for further development here.
- End on a strong point. (I’m not a fan of the “summary” paragraph for a paper this short because it ends up feeling like filler. Instead, I suggest using a simple transition like “Finally,” or “The last way that the ChatGPT article could be improved is . . . .” to transition into your final point.)
- How could the concluding paragraph be more effective?
Offer a piece of evidence after you state how AI is inaccurate and cannot comprehend academics.
- In your final paragraph, avoid “fizzling out.” Try ending the paragraph with a quotation from the story if you opened your story with a quotation.
The author did not start with a quote.
- Write at least two things that you found interesting about the paper.
I found it interesting that you explained to the readers how someone can improve their essay by putting their theses statement at the end of their first paragraph. Also, how organized you stay within each paragraph, making it easy for the readers to read.
- What would you like to hear more about?
How ChatGPT works when writing an essay like this, you explained what ChatGPT did to chance the essay but I would like to know how it is able to do that in an instant.